EL6 · 4 Descriptive and narrative writing mind map

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EL6 · 4 Descriptive and narrative writing mind map

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Cohesion 3

Within and across paragraphs: Connections work at several scales
Avoiding repetition: Every addition needs a purpose

Revision 1

Revision before proofreading: Meaning first, accuracy next
Testing audience needs: Supply relevant missing knowledge
Sentence-level editing: Improve precision without losing meaning

Revision 2

Peer feedback: Focused feedback supports decisions
Reading aloud: Useful check, not a complete test
Proofreading passes: Separate passes focus attention

Revision 3

Using digital tools: Tools advise; writer decides
Presentation and handwriting: Legibility supports communication
Worked cohesion edit: Clear links must remain accurate

Connections

Cohesion 3 → Revision 1: Organisation directs attention while specific choices develop meaning.