EL6 Descriptive and narrative writing personal learning checklist
AQA GCSE English Language 8700 · Paper 1
Short checks support knowledge; demonstrate extended reading, writing and spoken communication with actual work and teacher feedback.
Name ____________________ Class __________ Date __________
Tick one box per statement. Red: need help. Amber: partly confident. Green: can do independently.
| I can | Red | Amber | Green |
|---|---|---|---|
| Narrative design | |||
| Plan a focused narrative with a motivated character | |||
| Choose an opening and develop tension purposefully | |||
| Develop a climax and an earned resolution | |||
| Maintain viewpoint and control narrative time | |||
| Description and speech | |||
| Use selected setting and sensory detail to serve the story | |||
| Balance showing, telling and precise vocabulary | |||
| Develop consistent figurative imagery | |||
| Use dialogue and paragraphing to advance a scene | |||
| Planning | |||
| Analyse a task before selecting ideas | |||
| Distinguish prior knowledge from information needing research | |||
| Organise a flexible plan and develop a sustained draft | |||
| Cohesion | |||
| Develop focused paragraphs with clear progression | |||
| Distinguish coherence from surface cohesion | |||
| Maintain clear references and useful lexical links | |||
| Choose transitions that express the actual relationship | |||
| Editing | |||
| Revise content and structure before surface proofreading | |||
| Give and use specific peer feedback | |||
| Use reading aloud and focused proofreading passes | |||
| Evaluate digital suggestions in context | |||
| Prepare a legible final response and evaluate its success | |||
| GCSE descriptive and narrative writing | |||
| Fulfil the current descriptive or narrative-opening task with controlled organisation. | |||
| Develop narrative interest and character through specific choices. | |||
| Organise description through meaningful focus and imagery. | |||
| Control accuracy alongside imaginative development. | |||
Next revision priority: __________________________________________________